Exercise #45: Dinner Time

Exercise 45 Instructions

She was sleeping following a long day when it clanked up to her. She regarded it with poison green eyes. It had a bit of red on its head that smelled like bird and one appendage ended in a long point. She couldn’t see eyes or a mouth, but it looked like one of the “two legs” she’d eaten earlier in the day. It yelled something at her as she bent down to sniff it closer. There was a lot of metal smell, but the scent of the “two legs” was strong here as well. Yum, she thought, canned food.

This entry, if you’ve checked the link, is necessarily short.  The word limitation made this more of a challenge for me; the challenge being to tell a story with a minimum of words.

So, if you can tell what the subject of this story is and who the main character is, say so in the comments.  Likewise if you can’t tell what and who they are.


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